Date: 2007-04-08 01:05 pm (UTC)
Sentence No. 2 is absolutely splendid. ^^; "Don't they know she is afraid of the light?"

Sentence No. 5 seems a jump from the previous style. I can't decide yet if I like it. >>;


But I love the idea of Bakura already starting to control Ryou's hand, messing up his letters...agh, it's so great.

"The dark one holds him close and does not let him explain the truth." Seriously. Hearts.

I can't wait for moooore.
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