Fic: And That's a Promise (Olympic swimmers RPS, Michael Phelps/Ryan Lochte, rating: adult)

[imagines]

Once again: ALL THE FAULT OF blindmadness. I think. I can't quite remember. Either I mentioned it and she said, "WRITE IT," or she mentioned it and I said, "I'LL WRITE IT." Anyway. Here be porn.

Summary: Michael's proud of Ryan for [spoiler for 200 m backstroke under cut], so he gives him a present.

Summary: Michael's proud of Ryan for winning his first individual gold, so he gives him a present.

And That's a Promise

Ryan braces his hands on the edge of a sink in the locker room, staring at his face in the mirror. That is the face of the best backstroker in the world. Pretty fucking awesome. He's grinning again even though his face already hurts from smiling.

The locker room door slams; a moment later, Michael appears behind him in the mirror. "Heard you got some new hardware," Michael says. "Good job." He's already in his suit for his next race.

"Thanks, man," says Ryan. Turning to face Michael, he touches his medal for probably the hundredth time. He might never take it off. He could sleep wearing it, maybe even swim wearing it.

Michael's moved closer to him. "Hey, remember what I said I'd do if you won gold here?"

Yeah, Ryan remembers. A guy doesn't forget that kind of thing. "I figured you were bullshitting me, doing macho posturing or something. You didn't think I'd win, right?"

Michael shrugs. "I thought you might have a chance. Anyway, I wasn't kidding you. I mean, if you're up for it."

"I might be. If you are." Ryan shoves away the faint beginnings of panic squirming in his stomach. For god's sake, this is Michael. What does Ryan have to be scared about?

"I'll have to be quick," Michael says. "I have another race."

"Gonna take gold again, I bet."

"Oh? What do you bet?" Michael's trying to hold back a smirk. He's failing miserably.

"Same thing you're gonna give me," Ryan says. "If you hurry up and do it before you have to race, anyway. You can't be late, man."

"Yeah, okay," says Michael, and Ryan hasn't blinked twice before Michael's kneeling in front of him, peeling Ryan's suit down around his thighs.

It's not the best head Ryan's ever gotten. Michael isn't particularly creative with his mouth. But it's enough, and Ryan gets to the edge--and Michael pulls back.

"Dude, you gonna finish soon?" Michael asks. "I have to leave in like two minutes."

"Fucker," Ryan gasps, trying to regain coherency. "You suck at sucking dick, man, I was just about to--"

Michael is cracking up. "Got you," he says. "Oh my god, you should see your face." Before Ryan can punch his stupid nose, Michael gets his mouth back around Ryan's dick, and Ryan's still kind of pissed off, so he pulls Michael's hair a little when he comes, and Michael makes this really hot noise in the back of his throat.

Michael spits in the sink while Ryan pulls up his suit. "I'll get you back for this, you know that, right?" Ryan tells him.

"Yeah? And just what are you gonna do to me?"

"Win your damn gold and find out."

"I'll be sure to do that," says Michael, heading for the door. "Congratulations again."

"Thanks, dude. Good luck."

Yeah, that was some okay head, Ryan guesses. He crosses his fingers. Michael had better get gold. Ryan has plans.

Comments

[agape-eternal.livejournal.com]

He has plans? Oh my *rubs hands together*

[harmonde.livejournal.com]

Please tell me we get to find out what Ryan's plans are. :D

[imagines.livejournal.com]

Oh, I was turning over the sequel in my head before I even got around to writing this. ;p

[harmonde.livejournal.com]

YES. *pumps fist*

[andcrashrewind.livejournal.com]

All I can really think is
...AHAHA OLYMPIAN PORN.

I'm sorry. This totally doesn't work for me. *headwall*

[imagines.livejournal.com]

WHAT YOU'RE SURPRISED? I ALREADY WROTE ABOUT THE GYMNASTS. >_> DID YOU THINK I WOULDN'T DO IT AGAIN. 8D

[blindmadness.livejournal.com]

I AM OF THE FIRM BELIEF THAT EVERY DAY SHOULD HAVE AT LEAST ONE MICHAEL/RYAN BLOWJOB IN IT. OKAY? OKAY.

Things I love: Ryan feeling like he could wear his medal everywhere (to sleep! To swim! Oh, Ryan <3333), their congratulating one another with blowjobs at all (BEST IDEA EVER, OKAY? >__> And I don't even remember whether it was mine or yours first), Michael teasing (IT TOTALLY HAPPENS), and for some reason, Michael not being that creative with his mouth. I don't know why, but that feels right to me. WHICH IS NOT TO SAY THAT I DON'T THINK PHELPSBLOWJOBS ARE AWESOME, just. Yeah.

ANYWAY, YES. I CANNOT WAIT FOR THIS SEQUEL AT ALL. >____>

[imagines.livejournal.com]

DO YOU MEAN EVERY DAY OF MICHAEL & RYAN'S, OR DO YOU MEAN EVERY DAY ON MY JOURNAL? BECAUSE WHILE THEY MIGHT BE ABLE TO KEEP UP THAT PACE, I CERTAINLY CANNOT. >_>

I may not know whether it was my idea or yours, but it is STILL YOUR FAULT. Accept your blame, you enabling instigator, you!

[electrumqueen.livejournal.com]

ahaha OH MICHAEL.

...and now i am looking forward to Ryan's plans. =D

[electricfool]

oh Ryan. you slay me. XD

and yea, we better get what Ryan does to Michael. ;P

[laniaaa.livejournal.com]

wow. awesomeness. *giggles delightedly*
sequal is bound to be amazing ;]

xx

[kohl-eyed.livejournal.com]

I second strata85! Please, please, let's see what Ryan will do. XD

I guess some concrit! Comments! Ish! Firstly, this passage:

Yeah, Ryan remembers. A guy doesn't forget that kind of thing. "I figured you were bullshitting me, doing macho posturing or something. You didn't think I'd win, right?"

which Simone would rewrite with "I figured you were bullshitting me..." etc. as:

Yeah, Ryan remembers. A guy doesn't forget that kind of thing. He'd figured Michael was bullshitting, doing macho posturing or something. "You didn't think I'd win, right?" I just feel like Ryan's line would be shorter, for some reason.

And not exactly concrit but an observation, and now you can totally tell I have never been on the receiving end of a blowjob XDDD...is Michael's hair even long enough to pull? I could see Lochte getting his hair grabbed, but Michael?

Otherwise, dude. XD Olympic porn from Kit is amazing and thank goodness the Olympics aren't over for some time...I love the detail with Ryan and the medal and how he feels like he could sleep in it. XD

[imagines.livejournal.com]

I can't rewrite it that way--he is being Mocking. He didn't really figure anything at all. :p

...I'd like to know how YOU would be on the receiving end of a blowjob. IS THERE SOMETHING YOU WOULD LIKE TO TELL ME? Anyway, uh, Michael's hair...is totally long enough for pulling a little bit. It's really short. Ryan had to, like, scrunch his fingers in it. I totally didn't forget how short it is or anything. UM. Yes, I think it'd be just barely long enough.

The Olympics aren't over, but the parts I would write fic about are! :p The U.S. men aren't in individual gymnastics, and swimming is done, so... maybe I should learn something about beach volleyball?

UM, anyway. Yeah, I was thinking that "sleep in it" detail might be kind of stupid--who would DO that?--and then I read an article after I posted about Tiger Woods (? I think it was him--either him or a tennis player) sleeping with his jacket after he'd won something, so. Ryan definitely slept in that medal. *straightens tinhat*

[kohl-eyed.livejournal.com]

Haha, okay. I guess I have lingering biases against jocks! "'Macho posturing' is totally too many syllables for their mouths to handle!" etc. etc. /sheepish

Re: medal thing, at first I was like, "Dude, why would you sleep in a medal?" and attributed it to character quirk, which it kind of is, but then I thought about it more, and...I mean, come on. This is the OLYMPICS. It is like, the ENTIRE WORLD. That medal is proof that you PWNED THE WORLD. I would eat, sleep, and shower in it! And take it for walks! This is probably not at all what you meant! But it is my own justification... >>;;;

Re: blowjob, UM. WELL. No, this would sadly never be possible! I have never been in any such kind of hair-pulling situation! Haha, I know it was a weird thing to have problems with. But compared to, uh, MY kind of pretty boy, Michael Phelps is, like, BALD, so I did a double-take and had to go back and check. XD;;

YES, BEACH VOLLEYBALL, YES. And you don't even have to know anything! It can be PWP! In the sand! *shifty-eyes*

[imagines.livejournal.com]

If Ryan is gonna canonly tease Michael for singing like a girl on the podium, he can mock him for macho posturing! >-> DESPITE his blog entries that look like he skipped English class a lot. *crams tinhat harder onto head*

This is the OLYMPICS. It is like, the ENTIRE WORLD. That medal is proof that you PWNED THE WORLD. I would eat, sleep, and shower in it! And take it for walks!

*CRACKS UP* Yes, exactly. Ryan pwned the entire world all on his own for his very first time. He deserves a crazy character quirk like that. >__>

Not a weird thing... in fact, I suspect it is possibly a mistake. >_> But idk, I haven't gotten to touch Michael's hair, and my TV is kinda fuzzy, so I can't be sure. In the mean time, I choose to believe it is long enough. Yes.

PWP IN THE SAND WOULD BE PAINFUL, MISS!!

[kohl-eyed.livejournal.com]

Yes, so it would go like this!

"I don't know if this is a good idea..."
"No one's watching."
"But sand--"

And then afterward they are all, Okay, maybe this was a bad idea, but whatever, we feel so damn good! Etc. >>

[gokuma.livejournal.com]

Olympic slash, yaaay! *cheers*

[novelized.livejournal.com]

YES amazing hahaha. such a pretty pretty picture. MORE... please :D

[cici-chan.livejournal.com]

Oh my god, I'm dead. I've died, and I'm dead.

[imagines.livejournal.com]

*gets Brad to resuscitate* ...although I hope that doesn't kill you more. >_>

[bbmrebel.livejournal.com]

hot - thanks for sharing - continue?

[alchemyonfire.livejournal.com]

YES. ryan's an evil head genius. xD
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